原文作者：郑培森

　　姓名： 郑培森
　　出生日期： 1998 年 8月23 日
　　座右铭： 书籍是人类进步的阶梯。
　　就读学校： 浙江省青田县温溪镇第一中学
　　指导教师： 杨灵微
　　chen binqiang lives in pan’an county in south china’s zhejiang province. his father died in a traffic accident when he was only eight years old. his mother raised the three children all alone. six years ago， his mother got alzheimer （老年痴呆症）. as a middle school teacher， he fastens the two of them together while riding his motorbike to go to work. he takes good care of his mother. he is very great. i think everyone should learn from him and respect our parents. on mother day’s eve， let’s do something meaningful for our parents. let’s do the housework， do some washing and cleaning and so on. would you like to tell your mother that you love her very much？ or would you like to give her a greeting card？ this is a very good way to show our love to her.[论文网]
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